Monday, September 22, 2008

until the time comes

the sky is too high
for us to sit
the road is too long
for us to stay
the past is too far
for us to mind
life's just to big
to just survived

there wil be time
for us to sit
there wil be a place
for us to stay
we're going to look back and smile
to see how much we have survived

that time couldn't be today
that place couldn't be this place
someday we're going to find that place
we're going to face the world today

8 comments:

scarlet_senseii said...

sepupuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...........


aku kangeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnn,
btw nice poem ^^

Sapphire said...

thx, but it does'nt rhyme like yours

Sapphire said...
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scarlet_senseii said...

mine doesn't rhyme at all.....?

Sapphire said...

I mean: yours ryme, mine don't

scarlet_senseii said...

and i mean punyaku nggak rhyming....

Sapphire said...

tapi ada yang rhyming nya kan? ah cape ngomongin rhyming, klo poem ga harus rhymng kan?

Sapphire said...

tapi ada yang rhyming nya kan? ah cape ngomongin rhyming, klo poem ga harus rhymng kan?